Description:
This is the order of how things happened in the story but not how we are going to represent them. We are going to portray them in a flashback way: from the last thing that happened to the first. As well, we ended up dividing our play in three (according to the scenes) and it looked like a pyramid:
Since the school play is officially over, we have been studying Andean theatre in class, but this week we have began to plan the One Act Play. For it we sat in a room and started discussing for possible concepts and stimuli. We had a piece of paper each and we tried to write down some ideas for it. At first we were out of them, but then we started to develop some interesting possibilities.
Analysis:
Firstly we started thinking about if the play this year should be a comedy or if we were trying a different proposal. As we decided it would be a comedy we thought about different ideas such as all of us being insects in the play and having as a setting a honeycomb. As we brainstormed ideas, suddenly we thought of a bathroom which was an unusual setting but we were willing to make it happen. They were all loose ideas that we tried to connect somehow. As the lack of ideas was an obstacle for us, we were asked to write our own interest on paper. This was done so we could identify what we were trying to say; because as we know theatre is for us to say something. As we started talking about are interests we joined some ideas and came with an attempt of a story. We decided two important things in that moment: we were going tho represent a crime and by talking we were given the idea of making it a Melodramatic play. We started creating a story of a man that would find an old picture of a man holding his teddy bear which would automatically create mystery since it is an unexplainable event. It was an interesting proposal, but we found ourselves lost in the plot since we didn't know what would happen next and wondering if we should have started by the end so we knew what actually happened. It was way too complicated considering what we wanted to do. So instead we thought of a simple proposal that would as well be entertaining: a small situation made big and fun by the characters.
As we wanted Melodrama we had come characteristics established:
- Extreme situations
- Improbable or incredible situations
- Brief pause on face expressions
This meant we had to take in account these characteristics while creating a story. Suddenly an idea of a family came out and how a small deal could become something really big. We thought for a suitable and simple situation for us 6. Five family members and a maid, tried to discover which of them was guilty of giving the family secret recipe book to the neighbours. This was a perfect situation to demonstrate that a small situation could be turned into a big one by Melodrama and it was a simple story to be made. We started by choosing who would represent each character and then how would the situations be. The characters created were, a son, a daughter, a father, a mother, a grandpa and a maid. As for the plot itself we tried to related to three things: love, money and health. We tried to fit it with our developing story and we did in a subjacent way. We linked that to one of the first ideas we had and we decided to set it in a bathroom. This was unusual and would give us a chance to explore the situations that could happen there but still make sense.
We planned a storyboard of the possible events in the play and it looked like this:
- Grandpa Alfie had smelt something from the recipe book
- Berlinda goes in to clean the bathroom
- Grandpa says he had smell one of the recipes
- The three characters discuss the issue and Berlinda accuses the mother of giving it away to pay her debts at the casino because now she is calmed with no need of her pills (HEALTH)
- Berlinda yells at Harriet Jessica Lauren
- Harriet Jessica Lauren discusses with Caroline Elizabeth Shaniqua since she thinks she gave it away for the love of their neighbour (LOVE)
- Caroline Elizabeth Shaniqua gets enough of her mother yelling at her for something she didn't do so accuses her brother of doing it to win one of his Yu Gi Oh cards (MONEY)
- Caroline Elizabeth Shaniqua meets her brother at a party and starts hitting him
- Spencer Alexis III ends up in the bathroom cleaning himself and putting on make up
This is the order of how things happened in the story but not how we are going to represent them. We are going to portray them in a flashback way: from the last thing that happened to the first. As well, we ended up dividing our play in three (according to the scenes) and it looked like a pyramid:
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Pyramid showing how the play looks
like graphically
The letters represent each of the
actor's initial
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Another interesting aspect our play would have is its order chronologically and inside the story. We managed to make bot parallel. By this I mean that the whole play is a racconto. Its first scene in real time shows what happened last in the story. The second scene shows what happened in between and the third scene shows what happened first in the story. It is an interesting factor that maintains the audience attention and makes them link the details together as the play progresses.
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Finally I would like to state that, we realised that the theatricality of this play relies on what is not shown such as the things typed in cursive above. It makes the audience imagine it by themselves and maybe in a different way we thought of it. It makes the connection with the audience not only by the funny part but by making them have a job, which is to imagine what happens in between scenes.
Connections:
I can connect this with last years' independent project we had to do. This is because for it we also had the idea of solving a crime. We had a similar story but it involved a dead person. Its setting was at a police station and every time showed a racconto of how each character saw the same event according to their point of view. It was supposed to be mystery and suspense unlike this play which is comedy.
I can make connections with the soap operas I have watched before such as 'Teresa', 'Amores Verdaderos', etc. This is because Melodrama has characteristics of its own and you can clearly identify them. The fact of being exaggerated and making small thing into bigger one. And also the stating of obvious facts and how there is a brief pause in the character's face.
Reflections:
We are starting a new play and once again I can see the creation process from a closer distance. It was interesting how one idea drag to another and it suddenly became our story for this play. I like how we are keeping the tradition and making it comedy and it would be funnier being melodramatic. This is a new theatre practice that we are experiencing and we are not yet so familiar so we are hoping that the audience will understand it. Anyway, we tried no to underestimate the audience, they can be clever interpreters and make their imagination flow if it is something that attracts them. So I was wondering to what extent can Melodrama work to create a connection with the audience? Does it limit itself to making them laugh? Or makes them feel what the character is feeling as well? Does is rely heavily on how attached you are to the plot like in soap operas?
